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by Toni   Apr 2, 2005


*This isn't a truthful poem, I'm not going to be dead by tomorrow or anything like that*

Crimson pain cascades from me
My veins, they have been weeping
Spilling out the thoughts inside
Oh God….I’m bleeding

Silence in the dead of night
My soul, it has been crying
Pouring out prevailing thoughts
Oh God…I’m dying

The light is setting in the past
I clothe myself in red
Tomorrow when the sun comes up
…Oh God, I will be dead

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    deep and emotional, you use words brilliantly. really do hope this isnt true at all, you really do deserve true happiness, and hopefully it will come very very soon. take care always, luv lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    Hun even if that isnt true it is very worrying coz it means that you feel like that and obviously that isnt good, its amazing, flowed effortlessly and showed your emotions well or at least it seemed to, oh hun i hope your okay, im here always,
    ellie,
    xxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    i got so worried about this at first, its a good job it isnt truthful oh god i hope you are ok antonia, i love you and could not bare losing you, amazing poem but a bit paniky at first *hugs* I LOVE YOU! please take care hun please xxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    TONI!!!!!!!!!

    OMG Toni I REALLY hopethis poem IS NOT truthful, please don't let it be truthful Toni no. Omg please don't leave me :*( Please, just hold on a little bit longer. Everything will be oaky, too many people love you to just let you go. Please don't do anything Toni. I need you. I believe in you. Please, PLEASE don't do anything. Please email me or txt me or ring me or f u c k just ANTHIGN to let me know you're okay. I'm so worried. :(

    PLEASE take GOOD care of yourself darlin.
    I love you so much. I can't go on without you.
    Please, just .. stay.
    All my love and so much more,
    Agather.