Barney, that is such a sweet, but upsetting poem =( yet still i loved it!...love ya sam xxxx

holy crap that was good by the way how long have been writing poems you have serious talent really!!!

xxx take care xxx

Thankyou you 2!
I appreciate all comments, and i have only been writing for around a year... i got on this site on Sunday... so less than a week...
i would put my old poems on, but i lost them! =(

WHOA!! That really was a well written poem....I've read so many poems about cutting and suicide and I don't normally like them regardless of how well written they are but this one was different...it was kind of sweet...with the hero and all..lol....very nice piece!! 5/5.....I can't understand why this poem is rated a 3.8...you are new to the site so you may not know...people don't rate fairly....if your poem is on the top rated some twit will rate it a one to get it off and if you say the wrong thing to someone they will rate all of your poems ones...so many silly reasons....don't pay attention to the votes....the rating system sucks....Your poem is way better than a 3.8...way better than a 5 really...anyhoo I will stop rambling now.....:)

Thankyou natalie!
And it was my mate... i asked him to view it... he did, but he does'nt like sad poems so he voted it a one! he didn't even read the whole thing, and he liked the way it was written, but as he doesn't like sad poems, he gave it a one! The fool... and yeh, the voting system is a little wierd, but hey... atleast good people like yourself are commenting and voting fairly! =)