Comments : Death Arrives...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Your filled with dread.....
    Death!!
    The word stands out loud and clear.

    Two fixes you need at the moment. Other wise it was fair.

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    That was great!
    the flow was great!
    it was blooming well written, and it gave me shivers lol

    Great work, keep it up.

    Love lisa -xo-