This was good, You could have maybe gone a little bit deeper, to explain why she felt like this, But thats just my opionin, Other then that, I liked it, I though it was really pure. Had strong feelings that are clearly understandable! Keep it up =] 5/5

luv natalie x0x

This is really good.....I don't know why people would give you that low of a rating... :) I think it is good