This was great. 5/5

Very good. I would have left out the very last line, but it truly is a great poem.

Keep up the good work.

--Shery

"the sky is crying tonight" deviantly wonderful ending! I love this poem!

wow. I'm kind of speechless. Thats one of the best I've ever read. I ......... man your good. I always like a good sad poem.

awww i really liked this altho i have a fear of clowns lol....only thing i could say is that i dont think the added last line fits in with the poem too well. just my opinion tho! hope u comment on my work!
well done 5/5
xxxLoUxxx

well dun gr8 as usual xxx

Another amazing poem u have such a way with words! I really enjoy reading ur poems! Don't know what else to say but exellent!

wow, that was sad, and definently different. i love the originality about this poem. 5/5

aw...great, original work... "the sky is crying tonight" - you're so good at this!

xxx

I am scared of clowns, pathetic, I know, but I really like this poem. You did a magnificent job.