Slip, slip

by Poncho Pandapants   Apr 2, 2005


Slip, Slip
I'm falling
Cut, cut
I'm dieing
No one to save me
I'm falling fast
I'm falling silently
No one will notice
No one cares
Slip, slip
I'm crawling
Cut, cut
I'm crying
Trying to get my life back
But still falling
Still dieing
Still crawling
Still crying

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    The simple language in this was really effective, it really lingered in my head n has moved me, well done

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I like it, the simplistic words just make it seem so...real. Excellent job! Hope you can keep your chin up, and if you need someone to talk to, comment on any of my poems, and I'll get back to you!
    Luv always, KT

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