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JOHNNY! I LOVE U! GREAT POEM! i was VERY sad u didn't email me a happy b-day,.,.. maybe u forgot! i got ur postcard but never sent it cuz no1 would get me stamps... ya im just dumb! love ya
-Molly

Nice. I can actually jump into your shoes and feel what you do. Nice

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