Stolen

by Eibutsina   Apr 2, 2005


It festers deep
Lurks within
Blackness, inevitable darkness
Hate fuelled rage so compelling.

Disgust and denial
Sleeplessness seems endless
A lack of ability
Expressing emotion, affection.

Rejection
Pity, wallowing in ones self shame
Projection
To another place

Innocence no longer stolen.

*Intrested to see peoples perception of my piece hence the reason its not specifically catergorised*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    been there done that excellent poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Mandy the less's are my emphasis in the lines your talking about - perhaps you should try reading my rhyming poetry - thanks for your feedback tho hun!

    Thanks can anyone give me and opinion what they think this poem is discribing or emphasising on?

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ya know at first I didn't get it..But after reading it 4 more times... Eirisa this poem is so meaningfull..I am ABSOLUTLEY loving how you are trying new styles and coming out with brilliant poems!! 5/5 sis! Very NICE
    Your lil sis,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    not too bad, some of the lines could be altered. One has too many "less" 's. But overall not too bad.

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