WOW! I would so love to be at that place right now lol..You have described that so perfect I couldn't have said it better myself..That would seriously be a dream come true if There was a place such as you described and it would be a dream to be there!! Wonderful discription and a magnificent poem as well!!
Much Love to you always,
~Chelsey~

your imagery is AMAZING! beautiful work Eirisa 5/5

Love
Heather

Thanks guys anyone who voted down my poem care to give me some feedback so I can edit it or fix it?

very good

outstanding in imagery flow and stucture beautitful poem

Thanks guys and Donald the voting doesn't worry me I just wish someone had left some feedback to help me improve my writing is all :o) But since not I sense it needs no improvement LoL

Wow, I like it! Great job! It really painted a picture in my head of a very nice place! Greatly written! Keep up the great work! And congradulations on all your awards!

Oh wow, what a beautiful poem!! I could actually picture it and hear the sounds and smell the smells!!!! I loved it.... 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

WOW. This was.. AMAZING! You did such an excellent job - as always!!! :-)

Thanks for the comment and vote.

Take care and keep writing! ♥

I closed my eyes and imagined that..wow, what a touching write. It reminds me so much of Thailand. You did a terrific job on this poem, I'm gonna come back and read some more of your poetry later. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Wow...such an amazing poem, you described everything so well..Truly beautiful writting Eirisa, Keep on writting my friend:o)
Luvs,
Shannon
~Touching Evil

Hey Girl, Lol .. Awesome work .. I loved it !!! You sure do know how to write poetry .. Lol .. but this one was also gr8 lol .. keep it up and check out some of my new poems lol .. and I cant wait to hear from you!!!

The imagery in this poem was excellent. I can totally envision all of the scenes you created here. It was like I was looking rather than reading. Fantastic!

Beautiful poem! I could really visualize it, excellent job!!!

I like your use of language and the vivid imagery in this. Usually I shy away from nature poems but this was enjoyable. Nice work :)

Fantastic poem. I feel as if I'm on your island. Very good imagery! Thanks by the way for your good comments on my Red Baron poem. Your family owns part of the plane? I bet that is a great story. I know the Australians were around when it crashed so did someone in your family grab a pieice? Thanks for sharing and again good poem.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Very good, great job on writing this

Beautiful poem. It almost like I was on that beach. That would be an improvemnet to Kansas. 5/5

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh... this was very good. Good word usage and nice rhyme.

Wow this is beautiful