Forever broken

by Amba   Apr 3, 2005


Forever broken, start to end,
Inside and out, Will never mend.
Lost everything I held so close,
Lost the Love I Loved the most.

Lost the meaning of this life,
Found the meaning for this knife.
Please someone help me, I’m tangled in this mess,
I can’t take the hurt no more, i can’t take the stress.

The strain on my Veins, i cant take it no more,
My tears are blood, it’s not right, is there a cure?
I don’t feel a thing as i look towards the sky,
Nothing, blank, and on i continue to cry.

Please someone out there save me from this place,
And take my memories, i need them all erased,
Wipe my red tears from my depressed face,
Or im afraid i might disappear with out a trace.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    Great poem.

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    I love how you expressed your pain in these words 5/5 especially in the first stanza
    thanks for the comment on my poem

    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Great poem. I really liked the way you expressed yourself here: "I don’t feel a thing as i look towards the sky,
    Nothing, blank, and on i continue to cry." You really show the pain you are in here. Terrific:) And by the way, thanks for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot:)

  • 19 years ago

    by hidden under lies

    very very nicely written i love it. very true read some of my poems if you get the chance

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I liked this alot. I can tell that this is truly from your heart, and that makes it so much better. Excellent writing. 5/5

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