GOOD POEM YOU EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS VERY NICELY

nice poem hope you write a lot more (:

Hey.. this is really good! 5/5. You have a lot of emotion in your poems. I could like feel the pain as I was reading this! Keep up the great work!

XOXO
~*Mya*~

excellent poem
5/5 i liked it u hav so much talent!
can u comment & vote on my poem y do boys lie
thankz
xx hayz xx

I liked this alot. I can tell that this is truly from your heart, and that makes it so much better. Excellent writing. 5/5

very very nicely written i love it. very true read some of my poems if you get the chance

Great poem. I really liked the way you expressed yourself here: "I don’t feel a thing as i look towards the sky,
Nothing, blank, and on i continue to cry." You really show the pain you are in here. Terrific:) And by the way, thanks for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot:)

I love how you expressed your pain in these words 5/5 especially in the first stanza
thanks for the comment on my poem

~NinjaGirl~

Great poem.

5/5.