Fall

by *theloved1*   Apr 3, 2005


Sometimes I think
you don't see me
sometimes I think
I'm invisible
sometimes I think
I'm not really there
sometimes I'm
not
really there
sometimes I'm drowning in
the sea of serenity
or choking on
the poison of powerlessness
sometimes I'm lost in
the maze of moments
or locked in
the cage of corruption
or blundering through
the forest of forgetfulness
sometimes I'm just
blinded by
the light of you
so then
if you can't see me
and I'm blinded by you
we lead each other
and I fall
into you
and you
fall into me

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  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    not ur best.. but its better than alot of other poems i read.... sry about the 2 you got.... its not THAT bad.... keep working on it... put a lil more emotion into it and youll be fine,... keep it up
    much love
    amanda