WOW! Beautiful really it is...

I would change one line though

"The I feel that kiss"

Outside of that it is perfect

WTG

--Sher

that was sweet

Really good.. Keep up the good work..
Thanks for commenting on my poem.

LOVED IT!! keep writin hun ur really gud xxx

plz read and comment on my poems if u get chance xxx

hey honey i had a good time that night i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was very sweet!!

great job!!

God Bless

Awww. This was sweet, Great job. I really enjoyed this!

Not as good as the last, but it was still very good! 5/5! Good job!

i really like your stlye of writin and the fact that u dont need to ryhme in order to get akll teh emotion within your poems....espec liked the line.....It put me in the clouds,
Yet, brought me down to earth.....thought it was so true
xxxLouxxx

Great poem! It's sooo sweet, reminds me of me and my bf hehe!

Ana

I love your poem