I feel what you are saying in this, not being supported by people you count on.... miserable feeling.. -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Over all it is very good. I would make a few changes thoug, but that is me.

I would change the last line on:

"I know you don't like my stuff,
But please don't put it down,
I don't mess with your country,
But you still insult me."

To something like:

So please, don't stand there and insult me.

Just my opinion play with it and see what you think.

Good Job

--Sher

it was an ok poem, and i can understand how metal artists are misunderstood.

this poem really hits home for me because I love music with my whole heart and soul....I love this poem....job well done.

Ok Mr. Heavy Metal, you wrote this from a victems point of view. And now your asking how did I ever do that. You need to let your work your talent what ever it may be, Be yours with time you will evalve we all do. The message in your music should not be look at me be proud of me, but should make people think, and if by some chance they don't see it be satified you did your best. Stay true to you and look for no ones approval hope this helps.

honey i like this i know it hurts to hear him say that. you should know that deep deep down in side he is proud of you even if he oes not show it. i love you honey!!!!!!!!!

honey i like this i know it hurts to hear him say that. you should know that deep deep down in side he is proud of you even if he oes not show it. i love you honey!!!!!!!!!

amazing!!! i really like the message of this poem. very strong meaning. keep up the great work! can't wait to read more
-xXx-

great poem well written realy expressed what i htink alot of ppl in that position feel

very very good poem.....i know exactly how u feel.....music is my life and i love all types of music. but people dont always see it as "music"....they see it as u said "just noise".....they dont see it as an art and that it takes talent....people dont like the music so they just put it down and dont give people the credit they deserve.....GREAT job on expressing what many teens these days feel.....i know i have felt this way many times....

keep up the awesome work!!

and rockin'!!!

God Bless†

Excellent poem. 5/5 I, too, am missunderstood. I can relate. Anyway, beautiful poem. Keep writing.

-Ice

AWESOME! That is soo true!! Metal can be very misunderstood, I think it was very good and 5/5!!

That was really good! I like the message n stuff, hope 2 hear from u soon!

That was very powerful. I can tell you put a lot of feeling into this poem. Hopefully with a little time, this person will learn to accept your music. It's hard, I know, just keep your head up and hang in there. Keep writing and take care.
><> Kiesha

Interesting, Confusing, and Good all in one poem. I Loved It. It was really good. Its really cool how you can make the readers feel different emotions while reading the poem :)

Amazing poem. Theres a lot of pain in this one. Great job!

Ana*

I know what your saying. i'm in a metal band myself, its easy for others to missjudge it as just pointless noise or tallentless screaming. but ignore them, enjoy doing what your doing and ignore those whos opinons do not matter

Fuk yes! more respect to metal! good poem dude I loved the topic