Great job, Rose! I loved this line:

"like bells tolling over my soul,
reshaping my heart."

Thats such a strong thought, reshaping my heart! Truly unique! Loved the entire poem from beginning to end! Very emotional... Can't wait to read more~Holly

But every memory is drowned,
each in tears or tainted blood,
when I lay again without you,
Hoping you lay too,
Somewhere...
Dreaming of me..

Gorgeous! I don't much like free verse, but you accomplished so much. Beautiful 5/5

Love Always,
Heather

ps keep in touch!