This is a GREAT poem. I love the way you wrote it and made it all go together and rhyme, sorry about not being able to get him,maybe you should have told him sonner that you loved him you should tell him now, before its too late. I dont know the situation but you should take a good look and decide if you do really love him or not. Either way it was a really good poem.

Thanx, i love all my poems, ive been writing them for like 5 years.
this one was about a really good friend i used to know who i obviously felt strongly for. but that doesnt matter now anyway because i lost him. i told his girl he was cheatin on her with me and now im good friends with her, he wont say one word to me but its okay, it wasnt love it was just a phase!