another good poem and another five :)

This reminds me of someone who was once very special to my life. He used to say those things to me. :( Great poem,

I looove the way you descirbe her.
its so pretty
it sounds like something my hubby wrote about me once.
5/5

This is a real touching poem. I really like your use of words, they give the poem a real nice flow. x

Sounded like u really loved this girl! Very well written and a really sweet poem! Another good one! Take Care! Brooke

What a dreamy poem... a girl always wonders and sometimes hopes that a guy will even think of her that way, although the end is sad.. I like this poem, It's got alot of emotion, and I like your choice of words. :)

i have already commented this poem..but i do love this poem very much..you have a talent.. i gave you a 5/5. thanks and have a good day!

I really really liked it, especially the ending!really emotional, and honest!

wow that is so beautiful the way you write about that girl (real or not) its brilliant! >>5/5<<
bec

really cute n romantic i loved it n like i promised 2 for 1 n obviosly dz is my 2nd commen ;)

This is so truely wonderful. You've caputured a brilliant image. Well done :)

This was really sweet. I love the last for lines. Great work, Hussain!

This is great! kinda hard to follow but i think it great!!

~shanny~

Wow!!! I like this poem alot. The girl you probally dedicated this to is a lucky grl. Good luck to u and her, if it still lasts. 5/5 again, great =)

Thankyou Zeenat for you comment
This poem was talking about my desire for this girl at the time we had were friends who fell out, later after we were friends again i showed her this poem. It won here over but it didnt last. She is a now in my past.

Thank you for all tour comments, as she did read them too an found out what was right infront of her. Shame it didnt last though.