Just a suggestion, in stanza 3, last line, the vulgarity causes the beauty to disappear in the poem, try, "of the turmoil I've been through." but other than that, nice job 5/5 anyways...Hope you can find a reason soon! I'll try to be a good friend to you and perhaps maybe a fraction of the pain will go away =( Love ya tonz!

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<333 Shauns Forever <333

ps...I really look like your sister, lol, thats cute...its not creepy at all =P

Later.

Thank You, I changed it... <3