Comments : Deceptive Whispers

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma Carnage

    zac, it breaks my heart to see you like this. you don't deserve to go through any of this. of everybody i know, you are the least deserving. i wish there was something i could do to help you through this more, but all i can really do is just be here for you. so please remember that i'm always here if you need to talk. just call me or text me or some how get in contact with me and i'll be there, i promise. you can get through this.

  • Wow, That was really good. Do you know how long that was!? hehe, it was good...lots of big words that I didn't understand though...:(
    Luvs,
    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Zac... that was so sad... I cried, just a little, tho. Aww, hon, I'm really sorry about how f-ed up life can be... I really wish I could be up there for you... ::hugs:: I am also here if you ever need anything, ok? call me or something, I'll be here. Ok? I'll ttyl... stay together, babe.
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by troubled

    wow that poem is awesome...a little confusing and long but still pretty good. its sad tho like everyone else already said. but remember ppl are here for you (including me) so jus give us a call or w/e k?

    *jen-jen*

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    omg... dude, that made me cry.... me... cry! i dont cry! (not usually at least). oh man..... i dont have anything else to say that hasnt already been said. It breaks me to see you like this. i wish i could be there with you forever and always so that you never feel like this....

    I'll be here, too.
    .:kelly:.

  • 19 years ago

    by |-Turkeylove-|

    OMG! That was awesome. But you shouldn't let your pain rule over your life. If you do, you'll be scared to let even the most deserving ones to search in your soul, and to be your friend. Don't ever let your pain rule you life, its not the answer.
    Please hang in there Zac, i don't know you, but i'm here for you all that i can be. And remember that you have many friends who are there for you too.
    With much love,
    Krista J.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    poetic revalation of the very soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Hmmmmm...

    Geese, Zac. I mean....dayum. You just PROVED your expertise in THIS poem...Its such a reflective story and I can't help but feel the same.

    But the thing about your poetry, I'm beginning to think, is that it influences the reader to be more like you, if only for the moment. But the persuasion is still there. Its so subtle, so unnoticed, but I know it's just persuasion.

    And I'm beginning to think that you're a really special person, not that I didn't already know that, but its because you feel is magnified in you. You feel pain, love, happiness, whatever emotion you're feeling strongly.

    An ideal person is what you are, m'love.