by Hayley Marie Apr 3, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Daddy, We Went Out Last Night, |
by Marjan
hey Hayley, you write so wonderfully. |
by Hayley Marie
what catergory do you think it should be in?! I thought family.. as its bout my dad.. xxx |
by Jordan
I know what your going through. Sometimes it just seems that no matter how hard I try, my dad just doesn't care. Honestly this was a good poem, but its in the wrong catogory. |
by Dorotea©
That was very cute and sad. I must say that the poem in itself wasn't that well written though, because the flow was choppy. Work on that some more, but otherwise good poem and keep writing, |
by Brookeღ
That's so sad he just doesn't understand. I hope he will figure it out before he loses his little girl. I have watched this happen to some of my friends. As you get older your dad will have regrets! Take Care and Stay Strong! Brooke |