hey this is a great poem i loved it i think it is one of my favorites you have wrote please return the favor and read some more of mine and i will do the same!!!

that was great and very emotional. i have a three year who will be going through a similar situation when she is old enough to know her father doesnt want her so it brought tears to my eyes, keep your head up sweetie! 5!

i can so relate to this poem, i have the same dad, so stupid, me growing up and bein independant has turned him into a selfish f**ker! hope your dad treats u better. lv A, x

It seems dads never understand that when you grow up you become ur own person! Ur poem really hit home, great writing! Thanx 4 da comment. Luv Gem xx

Hey, really good. I can relate. Good job. Keep it up and stay strong.
5/5

~no more

That's so sad he just doesn't understand. I hope he will figure it out before he loses his little girl. I have watched this happen to some of my friends. As you get older your dad will have regrets! Take Care and Stay Strong! Brooke

That was very cute and sad. I must say that the poem in itself wasn't that well written though, because the flow was choppy. Work on that some more, but otherwise good poem and keep writing,
Satuxxa

I know what your going through. Sometimes it just seems that no matter how hard I try, my dad just doesn't care. Honestly this was a good poem, but its in the wrong catogory.
Jordan-Paige

what catergory do you think it should be in?! I thought family.. as its bout my dad.. xxx

hey Hayley, you write so wonderfully.
absolutely incredible. your poems
really touch my heart. it seems you're
a nice sweet girl.
love you so much,
marjan