Wow that was brilliant, i loved the flow and i was so descriptive and moving.
this line however
*Over time their voice has shrunk*
i think should read
*Over time their voices have shrunk
or
*Over time their voices begin to shrink.
now they've become dimished.*

Just a thought and once again i love your ending it makes you think about everything that's you've read, It was amazing 5*5.
Tash
xoxox

It was excellent!! Good job and keep writing 5/5

Hey.. I love this poem. The last verse gave me chills. You have talent. But I would just like to know.. what exactly is a silent angel? Maybe I missed it (I have a tendency of being slow.) But it does sounds interesting. Keep writing :D

Lol a silent angel is someone who has kept everythin locked up and ended up killing themself basically coz it got 2 hard...ok so maybe it woznt that easy 2 spot...u wernt bein slow :P

wow this was REALLY good!

Wonderful poem, Keep up the good work..xx

well written dark poem

This is my favorite poem of yours, seems to have something special. Well done.

With their hurt on their own..is what that line should be I think. It was agood poem

nothin 2 say xcept, wow wat an amazin poem xxxx

Very nice poem! I really like it! 5.0

Very amazing, there are far too many silent angels in this world...

The Silent Angel sits and cries
Blood dripping down their wrist
Even though they become weak
Still drawing they persist

I like how you use the words "silent angel" in the first line in every stanza...nice job=)

keep it up

That was the best part...

AT times, a beautifully written poem with an excellent flow...but nevertheless, the flow does not seem perfect all the time, and the rhymes seem a little forced..

flow is a bit off....nice idea though i enjoyed it....4/5 keep it up...thanks for the comments on my poem...:) luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Brilliant poem! So nicely written! It'a very touchy!! Just loved it!

WOW! Beautifull very deep loved it 5/5

Cool. I love the them. and the line-

Not everyone could have missed this
Somebody must have known.

Lv A, x

This is pretty good!

I thought it was a very good poem :) good job

Mmmmwhat ah fabulous poems u make me feel good hehe u do a good job i was enjoyed thanks