by Mandy-Rae Apr 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
We will remember the good times, |
i dont have a grandpa but this poem I liked |
by Knoxy
Hey, great one...i really liked it..and you did most of it lol...but i had the idea...take care...stay strong... |
by Eibutsina
Didn't really have a flow, a beginning or an end...it was a beautiful dedication however Im sure it would have made your grandad smile for you girls...also a few spelling mistakes you should edit in their but nothing that can;t be fixed - hope you can work with my feedback :o) |
by BeeBeeGun
well done on this one keep you head up......keep up the good writing |