well done on this one keep you head up......keep up the good writing

Didn't really have a flow, a beginning or an end...it was a beautiful dedication however Im sure it would have made your grandad smile for you girls...also a few spelling mistakes you should edit in their but nothing that can;t be fixed - hope you can work with my feedback :o)

Hey, great one...i really liked it..and you did most of it lol...but i had the idea...take care...stay strong...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

i dont have a grandpa but this poem I liked