WOW! Another great poem. This was hot...keep them coming. By the way, thanks for commenting on my poems:) and check out my newest one.

beautiful poem amit, well done again, good work

Wow, each poem you write never ceases to amaze me, you're such a great writter, keep it up xxx

Amit,

Hun, I believe this is one of your best! Very nice!! 5/5 and very much unlike you, I'm loving how you're spicing it up! keep me dazzled =)

Love Always
Heather Craig

This was hot, Amit. Great job... one of your best, I think. This rocked out loud... great job!
Car

Awwww.. This was beautiful amit:X Your wonderfully talented with poetry:) Thank you for your wonderful comments it means alot to me!! God Bless You! *hugs to you* Keep it up! *5/5* all the way!!!

-x-Angel Bliss Sedusha-x-

Amit, This was definitely one of your best. These love poems you write simply blows my mind. Enjoyed absolutely beautiful. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

hi Amit, nicely written keep up the great thinking, from your thoughts spring the nicest poems, I enjoy them all. your friend Harry

NIce poem keep em coming!!!!

Wow great poem it was almost like watching a movie excellent job! Thanks for the comment

wow amit very intense poem, very romantic, it was hot!!
5 out of 5
(thanks for comentin on my poem)
xoxo bam

This is awesome, wow, so amazing... you should of put it in explicit, lol. Thank you for your comment, it means A LOT to me... (5/5.)
Always, Danielle.

What a great love poem, very well writen!!! So romantic and beautiful....Good as always!!

Love Sabrina

Amit, that poem was abstoutely touching! I loved it! 5/5! And Thank you for all the beautiful comments on mine and my boyfriends poem!

Amazing.. i loved it definitly a 5

exquisite taste of imagery, picturesque and perfectly coordinated, admirable amount of emotional energy released, it is evident.....who ever this was for had a very good night, to say the least..... definitive sense of poetic professionalism, keep them coming
thanks for the comment as well... greatly appreciative

too good bro very beautifully written!!!! really great write keeptup love ya! 5!

Where do I find a guy like u? Great job!

Awesome dude!!

oh it's so romantic! i love it! 5/5 awesome work. keep up the amazing stuff.
~Rae