oh what a nice and organized write! beautifully done! wonderful write amanda! rhyme was excellent~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Awwww! that's so cute! great work!

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<333 Shauns Forever <333

OMG i hope i can be as good a poet as you one day! deffinately adding u 2 my faves. Wow! Thanks for the comment and i'm glad i made you smile :)

Amanda, This is truly a beautiful poem. Our childhood is precious, something we always remember. hugs, lots of love, **Ann**

You too, thanks for the comment.

Sarah <3

Awsum! Great work and keep it up! 5 stars! *****

Love it.Keep up the good work.I'm adding u to my fav's.

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

What a charming trip down memory lane! That was lovely *smiles*

thats a really understandable poem u've pointed out the high and low lights of life and life as a child its fantasic luv sam xox

Your writing attracts a lot of visitors. A true reflection on how well you do and how much it is appreciated. Keep it up.

Beautiful poem. I love the way it flows. Keep it up.~Red

Wow....this brought back so many memories, I loved going to the park! I still do, it's just not as peaceful as I remember it! I really enjoyed this, especially the part about the hot slide! It didn't matter if I knew it was hot, I'd still slide again! That was the life! Great job, and thanx for the comment, I appreciate it loads~Holly

P.S. I am very honored....lol :)

wonderful peom, really happy one, great job! 5/5!

~PLP~ lil slam~

that was good. i always go on and check if someone has commented on my poems. i started to get some when i first joined, but after that i didn't get any. so thanks

Sweet, very sweet.....well done.

Beautiful.............simply beautifful, you are so very talented, I felt like a child running through the playground while I read this, so i read it a few times, just to feel that feeling......I would be honored if you could check out a few of mine, they go from sad, to ditty, and almost everything in between, I usually write more dedication style, please let me know what you think.....great job, off to read some more of your work...love ya becky

very intersting! i like it-like it! 25/5

BEAUTIFUL!!! wow this may be such a girl thing to say but those last lines almost made me cry:) I wish i could go back, life was so easy and simple! Anyway you really brought this poem to life, very descriptive and flowed amazingly!!! Loved it!5

You made me think of when i was little, even though im still only 15, but it makes me want to go on one of those spiney things and be yonug again, when nothing else matterd.
You are so talented.. It was such a good poem. I really enjoyed reading it
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Xox Bam