VERY GOOD

I thought that this poem was awesome, reminded me of a child, so innocent, not a care in the world.

Omg this was awsome
i turned back time to those days in which everything was so perfect, happy, and full of icecreams =)
i could feel like a little child while reading it, i enjoyed it veeryy much congratulations, this is one of the best poems i've ever read.
i wish i could write like u, everything flowed just perfectly and could bring back memories from my childhood. if u have any time, i would feel honored if u could read some of my work, just to know how to improve ^^
take care.

adios!

pili

Omfg !
every sentence touched me. every words dripped down a tear drop. i feel so sad . And sympathetic for you. did this really happen T.T ?

Thats sooo good keep it up!

Ohhhh my !! thats soooo amazing ! i really liked this poemm ! wat a beautiful picture u drew in our minds ! u are truely a pure talent ! keep it up

Omg its so brilliant, paints a perfect picture about innocence, lol, makes me want my childhood all back lol

well dne!
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Wow such a beautiful poem

Hey i love your poem.. obviously, i mean you were in the contest lol.. but my question is, if someone wants to be in the weekly poetry contest, how do they do this?

Amazing.

This is the only poem that has ever brough a tear to my eye....wow...i wish i could go back to being a little kid with no worries or not a single care in the world....i loved this keep it up your very good...

-matt-

I love it its so cut3

I love your poem, its so cute! Totally true...I'd like to go back to being a child again, living the carefree lifestyle!

Great poem.. everytime i see your name it makes me thing of my brother your are really telented keep it up
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What can I say? Totally Awesome.

Very nice. well-done. usually poems that long ramble away, but you managed to keep the focus on the poem and not too much on every single little detail. i applaud you.

I love your poem! It brought back such great memories! THANKS!

Very well written.

takes you back in time.

The playground is a place where we all were at one point in our life. where there wasn't all this drama going on
! ifonly we could return there. then maybe so many things wouldnt be falling apart! great job though hun! 5/5
comment on some of mine please!

This poem expresses a lot of what people feel in their everyday lives. I cannot thank you enough for sharing. Very well written, expressed, and all I can say basically is "WOW." Excellent. Keep up the great work!