by Shana
Wow.. makes you think. I miss my childhood days, I dont wanna let go...*sigh* |
by femmexpriv
What a sweet poem. Getting me all nostalgic :) Keep up the great work |
by Shadowlover
W.o.w! this is sure one REALLY AWESOME poem!! the meaning behind the poem is absolutely beautiful and the words that rhyme are really great.. fine work! one of the best ive ever read! keep it up! X) |
by rikki
-[A M A Z I N G]- i seriously love it. it made me want to cry. thanks. |
by Athan
Wow, this is a real good poem, im impressed. Good Job. |
by Jessica
Brings back some memories lol im only 15 but i still miss going to the park and just playin for hours on end with no worries at all just you and your friends having fun....awesome poem....keep up the great wrok |
Don't we all wish we could go back to those days and never leave. |
by mary
Awww this reminds me of so many memories! loved it! good job! |
by ReBecca
This takes me back. the sad thing is that once you lose your innocence with life, you never are able to go back to that "playground" again. truly, a brilliant writing. |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |
by thing3
This is brillant. i have no imagination what so ever, i could never write like this!! if only there was a place like that for everyone... well done 5/5 |
I enjoyed this poem alot. It made me feel and think about alot of things I wish I could go back to. |
by AJ
I love it . . . I miss the playground. |
by Heidi
Wow, I love it. |
by Gizmo
That brings back memories, loved it |