lol, you're right..the ending is cute...and I hope you aren't dying...i couldn't live without you...i love you sooooo much hunnie...you are sooo incredible..<3 i hope all is well.. and i hope you get ungrounded soon xxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

A thank you poem, thats a good thing to write. Especially after 163 poems. I wish it was a little longer though. The start is good, and the end is good, but the things between is a little weird. You should have said a little more about the dying thing. You kind of start on something you doesent finnish. If that makes sence. :)

That was good. It was nice you thank everyone who comments in a poem since it would be hard to keep track of every comment people leave for you.

It was good. it always nice to hear someone cares :P neways great poem and keep up the great writing!!
*-*Kat*-*

lol...Exactly. The dilemma of a writer. Or better yet, poet. And only the truly good ones experience it.