by Krystin Apr 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You are my angel |
by Brookeღ
Very well done! Exellent flow! You could feel the love you feel in this poem. You can't help who you fall in love with. Parents always think the person is the wrong one! It's to bad things didn't work out! Great work! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~ |
by angelposer
Hey again!! Another good poem!!! Parents just don't understand sometimes. It sucks. I'm glad you are happy though! How old is this guy anyway? |
by cac123
This is so sad.. your poem sends a beatiful message that many can relate to, it kind of reminds me of a Romeo Juliet thing. |
by StormySkies
Good Like it, very creative keep writing! |
by shannon
amazing.. i loved it! a 5/5 |