by *Guerita* Apr 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You where all about lies |
by Dorotea©
The other two poems you wanted me to check i've already read them, so i thought i'd read this one. I enjoyed it, but some parts had rhyming words that were definitly forced. Maybe try writing poems that don't rhyme. Other than that, keep writing and good poem, |