This hurts

by *Guerita*   Apr 4, 2005


You where all about lies
Always made me feel like I was about to die
You where that toy that I always wanted to cherish
But I was that flower that would soon perish
At times you where so luscious
And at others you would just vanish
I always hoped you would change
But I was just lost in that wide-open range
You are the one I love
But I know it will get lost in the above
Even though I would always weep
This love will always be down deep
In my heart
Maybe we where meant to be apart
But the feeling I have for you
Is oh so true
When will you notice that is wasn’t mean?
To take you pick
I would of understood
That the look in you eyes would never be mine
That you had chosen another line
Another path
That would make you laugh
That would make you happy
Just like I would of
But u never knew I could

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    The other two poems you wanted me to check i've already read them, so i thought i'd read this one. I enjoyed it, but some parts had rhyming words that were definitly forced. Maybe try writing poems that don't rhyme. Other than that, keep writing and good poem,
    Satuxxa