i love u love poems and everything u set them out perfectly every time well done sam xox

very beautiful! great job! very well-written! 5/5

plz comment on mine too!

Wow, I don't know why this isn't voted higher, people are stupid! Good poem anyhow.

Wow..I can definately relate on this one...I think everyone can. it was truly well written and sad. xxx

amazing, of course you get a 5 :) also thank you for commenting ^.^

i can relate so much to this poem, it's beautful. 5/5 without a doubt.
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This was so beautiful. I really loved it. xX Keep up the great work!

I laughed to see you use the frase "my sun, my stars, my moon" because its one I use often to describe a guy also. More of a sad poem really. But nice all the same. I like the different amount of lines in each stanza. It gives character. X

omg so beautiful!! you'v got real talent girl dont ever stop writing!! thats an order!! haha but really your a great poet 5/5

great job..love it..5/5.keep up the great work...

i really like this. said it was a song, i read it again kinda like a song. thats how good i thought it was. keep it up

what i love about all of your poems is the simplicity and realistic qualities that they all share. they are all simple, but sweet. definitley one of my favorite poets. 5/5

I really like this! It's a great poem and probably a gorgeous song...Wish I could hear it! Keep it up, you're really talented!

wow that was very good...very touching..lol..anyways great poem...5/5 and thanks for commenting on my poems...luv yasmwah

-kayla-

Wow, awsome poem. I loved it.
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