wow~! this is awesome! great poem, very organized and impressive! powerful write :)
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Great job...you paint the picture of Hell very nicely! Not that hell is a nice place by any means! Well, Harry you know what I mean! Awesome poem, keep to it~Holly

I agree with everyone, great job...beautifully constructed, so thought provoking. Your choice of diction was just word perfect, with so much visonary passion.

I have finally completed my 'secret love' taken me a while to complete, its straight from my heart hence a while to complete he!he! Im not sure if I like it...Might re-edit, dont know why just something. Let me know what you think.

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Hayley

Hi Harry, Great work - I am new to this but have taken some guidance from yours and HJ's work - its all one big poetic family! - I will read more of your work
quentin

I pray for that day to come!