5/5 verry well done

wow! beautiful~ very well written, impressive work~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Very well written poem! i liked the part
"rejected, neglected, feeling depressed
all of this is gone
cause when you’re at my side
i simply can do no wrong"

it just goes together so well!

i really liked this poem but got to say i dont like it when u add on those extra lines but thats just my taste i suppose. other then that i think the poem is brillaint!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

My favourite of yours so far....loved it...