One year

by *Guerita*   Apr 4, 2005


One year has gone by and a lot of things have changed
Sometimes we tend to get lost in the wide open range
But no matter what we say we are just teens
Which claim to have seen
The meaning of something gorgeous, the meaning of love
And even though our feeling sometimes get lost in the above
Your love flows threw my veins reaching my heart
Even though our love sometimes seams strong at others it is falling apart
I truly hope that this love, our love last
And simply doesn’t become a thing of the past
At times this love has me feeling so lost
But no matter what, you are what I want the most
You have helped me out so much
That I never want to lose your touch
Please tell me that you love me
Because I know our hearts are meant to be
I know that one day you will be able to see
How much you truly mean to me
Promise me that you will always stay
And I will promise you that I will always try and find a way
When our love is on the ground I promise I will make it rise
Just stay with me, and you will be surprised
That with me no feelings will ever be denied
That with me you will always be able to rely
If within my reach I will give you all I can give
And little by little you will see that with out you I simply cannot live
This love will be worth more then any gold
And in my eyes I will have the power to hold
A special endless light that will be so bright
That it will be all you see if you are lonely at night
I love you and you know I care
No matter what you know I will always be there

~*~ Plz vote honestly I don’t mind if you tell me it suck I want to improve ~*~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    One year has gone bye and things have changed
    Sometimes we get lost in the open range

    Umm..the "bye" I think is supposed to be "by." Anyway, very good poem. I really enjoyed this one. One suggestion though. Work on the rhyming some more, because in some parts it seems forced. Maybe you could find some better words to use in some parts. Very good poem, I liked it. Keep writing, take care.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    loose should be lose =)
    anyway, nice poem...sometimes love poems are very difficult to write.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very good rhymes there~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit