One year has gone bye and things have changed
Sometimes we get lost in the open range
Umm..the "bye" I think is supposed to be "by." Anyway, very good poem. I really enjoyed this one. One suggestion though. Work on the rhyming some more, because in some parts it seems forced. Maybe you could find some better words to use in some parts. Very good poem, I liked it. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa