Comments : One year

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very good rhymes there~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    loose should be lose =)
    anyway, nice poem...sometimes love poems are very difficult to write.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    One year has gone bye and things have changed
    Sometimes we get lost in the open range

    Umm..the "bye" I think is supposed to be "by." Anyway, very good poem. I really enjoyed this one. One suggestion though. Work on the rhyming some more, because in some parts it seems forced. Maybe you could find some better words to use in some parts. Very good poem, I liked it. Keep writing, take care.
    Satuxxa