Nice write, timothy! very good poem, and very well expressed~ keep writing~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

This is a very good poem and I feel happy for any girl who is ever a part of your life. Love is like floating......you think it doesn't take long to get up there but once you take the wrong path it takes even less time for you to fall back down. This is an awsome poem and never stop expressing your feelings through poetry.