Nice poem David.Very well written.

wow u can relly tell the emotion in it. it really shows how u ust grew apart without meaning to or wanting to...so sad and yet so beautifully written. did u show it her?feel free to email me the answer if u dont wana post it or u wana chat somemore...my address is on my profile.
take care
xxxLoUxxx

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over her just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

another great one!

Great, i liked that. Seems like a lot of your poems are about love and lost love, maybe try writing some more about other things. But anyway, good poem, I liked this one a lot too! Keep writing,
Satuxxa