wow really good flow to it the only think that lets it down is the surviving cos its only a lahf rhyme maybe u could use...prying,implying, underlying, with a differnt sentence...just some suggestions....take care and well done and thanks for ur comment...
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Hey thanx! i think thats a great idea! ill try some different lines when i get around to it! thanx again!

~*~oh wow, exactly like me and my mum and friends and boyfriend and shit..good job!!!!~*~

yes I agree short, but I'm still lovin it..ha..your a great writer never stop..nice poem

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a very to the point poe. keep it up 5/5