by Chelsea Apr 4, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
My plans are such a failure |
Maybe add something because it doesn't seem to be quite finished. Still it was great. |
by ~Kady~
Yeah this was a very great poem! Thanks for commenting on mine! I really appreciate it!! ^_^ Your poem was really well written! Yeah as Lil Luce said, I was getting into it and wanted to know what happened! But it was cut off *cries* HAHA Oh well! WONDERFUL! |
by Lil Luce
hey there...i really liked this poem but think it would benefit from being one or two stanzas longer as i was just gettin into it and really wanted to know what happened etc...really great poem. thanks for ur comment! |