Lost Friendship

by \\.Razor-Blade Romance.//   Apr 4, 2005


As the tears fall down my face
I'm taken to another place
A place where I can be free
away from the people who cannot see
me for me
I'm lost in this dark hole called life
i reached out and told you everything
but u did nothin but shove it back in my face
this life is like a big race
seeing who can get back at one another 1st
then the pain just feels worse

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  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    wow can totally relate to this poem
    keep it up xxx

    one suggestion, i think maybe u shd try a rhyming poem, like rly rhyming

    maybe like aabb, or abab. i think with the amount of power u write with, those poems cd be reeeeeeeli affective xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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