Something Like Love

by Samantha   Apr 4, 2005


You say I'm beautiful - I always disagree
It's not that I'm modest - Beauty's just not something I see
When I look in the mirror - I'm too entranced
By the person behind me - On my shoulders your hands
That trail down my sides - Hold me in your arms
Keep me always - Safe from harm

Time is such a burden - There's never enough
Seems time flies when you're flying - There aren't any clocks above
In the sky - Where I always seem to be
With you - I seem to have forgotten gravity
All the laws written before - Have given way to you
Conquering my mind's judgement - There's nothing I can do.

© Likuid Pain
aka Samantha Tulgetske

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Niceee. i love this: Time is such a burden - There's never enough
    Seems time flies when you're flying - There aren't any clocks above
    In the sky

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This has to be one of my favorite love poems. It is subtle, but so very beautiful. Like your on cloud 9 and there is no turning back. I loved it. Keep this up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Thispoem, was, not the best i've read, not sure what this poem is about, maybe a person trying to find who they are? ? ? well keep writing,

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Very beautiful I love it....but you should try to make the lines more even...Just my opinion, you and many people might disagree =0) lol...but very good...

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice job! i like your word choice in this one! keep it up!

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