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by Sarah-Louise Apr 4, 2005 category : Love, romance / desired love
Even though we're talking now, There's something that's not right, And even though the tears have dried, I still have burning eyes. Even though I've told you now, That this baby's yours and mine, You say you're thrilled, but I can see, You treat it like some crime. Even though you hold my hand, And assure me it's OK, I still feel lonely by your side, But I cannot help but stay. Even though I want you more, You think we're best as friends, So I'll hold on to every chance, And I'll fight until the end. Even though my love's declared, I don't think you'll ever see, The impact you've mad on my life, And the change you've made to me. Even though I should be out, Enjoying these precious years, I want to sit, and hold you tight, I want to keep you here. Even though, I think you know, You've turned my life around, It's not enough, I want you more, So sweep me off the ground. I'm not sure I can take so much, This condition that I'm in, But I want to give it all up for you, So let the games begin. [Don't really know where this was going!]
by Amit
wow! sarah, excellent poem! very well done~ 5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit