by Kia Apr 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
God help me |
This poem is soo sad.i feel just like this.......it was just so touching..it got to me.you could hear the screams of this person by just reading this |
by Samantha
Wow.. i really liked the way you wrote this... just how the words flowed was amazing in itself... keep it up! |
by Lenny
That is awesome, fantastic, brilliant, exquisite, breath-taking, inspiring. The faith is strong in this one. Love the repitition and love the message. Beautiful piece. |
by Johnny Mac
God is invisible |
by Natalie84
I like this! I think Help Me was repeated a couple too many times but it worked. Also you bounced from say --I-- to you ....."You feel like you cant do it And you're backed up against a wall" The YOU's in there should be I's. I THINK.....maybe you meant to do that....I'm not sure. |