Very well done.

OMG so sad but i love the way you wrote it. I can feel your pain. Keep your chin up. Thanks for the comment :)

Hey, this is really good..keep ur head up...everythingz gonna be alrite, i'm alwayz here if you ever need someone to talk to...take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

this was ok I got a poem called I hate you you may like and another called you wanted this tell me what you think.

im not particularily religious...to say the least...but this poem was very moving. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.
~Freak~

Wow, that was really good. Nice work. <3333 jess

aw that was a good poem! i love it and thanks for commenting on mine!

I like this! I think Help Me was repeated a couple too many times but it worked. Also you bounced from say --I-- to you ....."You feel like you cant do it And you're backed up against a wall" The YOU's in there should be I's. I THINK.....maybe you meant to do that....I'm not sure.

All in all I really liked this! Being a teenager is tough....but it only gets worse when you get older my dear....lol Nicely done!! I love poem that bring ones faith in.... :)

God is invisible

That is awesome, fantastic, brilliant, exquisite, breath-taking, inspiring. The faith is strong in this one. Love the repitition and love the message. Beautiful piece.

-Lenny

Wow.. i really liked the way you wrote this... just how the words flowed was amazing in itself... keep it up!

sammie

This poem is soo sad.i feel just like this.......it was just so touching..it got to me.you could hear the screams of this person by just reading this