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by RetiCent Apr 5, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
For one brief moment in my life I had you in my arms. Holding you in my arms, I felt I had the world. I knew it was real, I could see your beautiful hair, I could smell your sweet scent, I could hear your enchanting voice ringing in my head. I thought it would last forever, Only to realize that we wouldn’t last. I never realized how much you meant until I lost you for good. You changed my life when you left. I felt my life slowly slipping, I didn’t know what to do now that you were gone. What else was left, without you
by Pure Silence
Hey Good poem, but a suggestion? -dont hurt me please im not trying to be mean- Maybe forcus on the love lost rather then act of losing it you know? like, when writing, emotion is better then situation? I hope it makes sense and helps=s its a good poem! Jenn