Wonderful.

very sad ......indeed u can picture as i read along the story but theres a missing piece to.the story behind the poem that got me thinking as to y? u hate ur surname and ur father?

dont answer its just questions which am sure many readers will have in their heads.

great job! take care

great job! i love it... i hate my dad too, but the thing is he does want me in his life.. but i dont want to be
~Cara