great poem! good work. by the way to your earlier comment: trice means moment, so my poem “Abandoned” does make sence . Thank you for taking the time to write your comment though, I found it very helpful. Thank you for your honesty because not many people are; you should be proud of yourself. Congrats on this poem it is a great sentiment. I see your respect for words and your true emotions. Love it a lot. Always Mistaken Identity *(Sammi)
p.s I’m giving this poem a 5, it is very well written. Keep writing.

That was an impressive poem, I liked the format and the way you wrote it, keep it up xxx