OMG! This is an awesome poem! I love to read your work. i have you added on my fav. You rock out loud! |
by Carlee Ann
Please, Zac, talk to me. This was... stunning, but scary... Please let me k now you are ok, alright? Don't leave me in the dark... I only want to help. Ok? Thank you... great work... |
This is really really good Zac, I really liked it. It was good, but scary. I hope everything is alright. If not, let me know if you want to talk. You have SO much talent. And I'm perdy sure Cort told you there's a freak in Idaho who wants to talk to you!! LOL, that would be me. Anyways, great write and let me know if you need anything alright hun? Have a good day |
Omg...that is one of my favs by the way it was written...but it's so sad...I feel the same as Carlee...worried...i guess. We don't even talk anymore... |
by Carlee Ann
Ok, buddy, really. You won't answer your phone... emails... anything. I can understand that you don't want to talk... but please. I have... I NEED to know you are ok. I'm really worried about you... Don't leave me in the dark. I can't live without your light... please talk to me. I'm here for you, ok? I just want to help... please, let me help. Please... |
Zac...are u ok? I want to talk to you ...I'm scared...please talk to me... |
by Carlee Ann
Zac... thank God... he speaks! Please, IM me or something. Please... i NEED to talk to you... |
by Carlee Ann
HEY! YOU CAN'T QUIT POEMS AND QUOTES! DON'T! PLEASE?? |
excellent structure |
by Just Sierra
Stirring...thought provoking. If i were voting. i'd say 5/5 |