Makes one think really hard about all the lives lost so ours can be spared. Good job putting things back into perceptive for the reader.

--Sher

Omg so beautifully expressed! It was wonderful to read and thanks for your comment on mine. It really meant alot to me 5! :)

wOW awesome poem really put the sacrfice of those who fight for country back into the readers mind. Well written it flowed really well.

keep it up!

aw, that was kinda sad, but it was awesome! keep up the great work! 5/5